This is a companion resource for my September 2003 Acupuncture
Today article, "How and Why to Write About Chinese Medicine
to the Public."
In that article, I emphasized the importance of rewriting,
and I offered a copy of the Word doc as an example.
This doc recorded my edits after the first draft. You
should be able to see them right away, but if not, go to the Tools
menu (in Word), select Track Changes>Highlight Changes, and
select 'Highlight Changes on Screen.'
Next is the link. If you click, it will just open it in
Word for you, and you'll have to save it somewhere. Or, you can
right-click on the link, and choose 'Save Target As' to save it
on your computer. Click
or right-click here for the doc.